Thursday, May 5, 2011

Text Analysis: "The Crisis" by Thomas Paine, Dec. 23, 1776

1. What is the author arguing?
The author, Thomas Paine, is makes several arguments throughout this document, however there are three main arguments that I feel drive his essay. The first of these is the argument that the particular crisis which he is describing is that, despite claiming its independence, America is still in the position of being like a "slave" to Britain. "Britain, with an army to enforce her tyranny, has declared that she has a right (not only to TAX) but "to BIND us in ALL CASES WHATSOEVER" and if being bound in that manner, is not slavery, then is there not such a thing as slavery upon earth." (Paine, paragraph 1). He feels that America's duty now is to conquer the tyranny of Britain, and though it is not an easy fight, the things that are worth fighting for the most are never easy to obtain. He follows this argument up by mentioning that he feels America would most likely be in a better position had it declared independence from Britain sooner. His second main argument in the essay is that the Middle colonies have a high presence of supporters of the Tory political faction, or "Tories," as he refers to them, and that this is why the middle colonies have been made the "seat of war" by Britain. Tories were the British loyalists who inhabited the British colonies of North America and supported the Crown during the Revolutionary War. He makes his feelings about Tories very clear when he states: "Every Tory is a coward; for servile, slavish, self-interested fear is the foundation of Toryism; and a man under such influence, though he may be cruel, never can be brave." (Paine, paragraph 7). The third main argument which I identified in "The Crisis" is that the war must be fought, and that Americas soldiers must be the victors, in order to solidify American independence. He states that American did not prepare for war early on because they did not feel the need to fight, and as a result did not assemble an army. Now that they are in a position where they must protect their independence, he calls out to all people in all states to ban together and help in the fight, because he states: "better have too much force than too little, when so great an object is at stake." (Paine, paragraph 11). Overall it is clear, Paine feels America's only choice to uphold her freedom is to fight for it, and if she remains strong and endures, this will inevitably be achieved.

2. How does the author appeal to logos (logic), pathos (emotional quality), and ethos (the writer’s perceived character) with their argument?
Paine was a powerful writer, and in "The Crisis" he does a particularly effective job of using all three concepts of logos, pathos, and ethos to clearly explain his argument. He does this while at the same time reaching out to those he is speaking to in order to evoke the audience's emotions by expressing his own passionate opinions regarding America's current situation. His appeal to logos, or the logic of his arguments, can be found throughout the essay, as he does a good job of clearly organizing and explaining each point he brings up. One example of this is in the closing paragraph of his essay: "I thank God, that I fear not. I see no real cause for fear. I know our situation well, and can see the way out of it." Paine is so confident and assuring that the situation is clear and obvious, and the solution is even clearer. America must defend herself, because it is the logical thing to do.
Although the entire essay is full of emotional passages, there are a few specific sections which stood out to me in this way. One example of Paine appealing to pathos in his essay is the section in which he discusses the happy country which America is and has the potential to be, and that war is inevitable to achieve this happiness. "America will never be happy till she gets clear of foreign dominion. Wars, without ceasing, will break out till that period arrives, and the continent must in the end be conqueror; for though the flame of liberty may sometimes cease to shine, the coal can never expire." Speaking of the happiness of the country appeals to the idea of emotional equality, and that every American has the right to, along with life and liberty, the ;pursuit of happiness. This idea of being happy, and living in a "happy America" obviously evokes the emotion of hope, and the vision for a bright future.
Because the entire essay is written by Paine from his first person perspective, it includes a great deal of hints towards ethos, or Paine's perceived character. He expresses himself as a man who wants what he assumes every American wants - the simple freedom to live in a country which is not bound to any tyrant nation. He also expresses perceived character by speaking directly to the audience. He writes as if he is speaking as a friend: "Quitting this class of men, I turn with the warm ardor of a friend to those who have nobly stood, and are yet determined to stand the matter out." This displays Paine's personal respect to those who are in the fight with him.

3. What is the historical significance/relevance of this document?
The historical significance of this document is that it was written on December 23, 1776 by Thomas Paine, and was the first pamphlet in a pro-revolutionary pamphlet series called "The American Crisis." It was read aloud to the soldiers who fought under George Washington in order to inspire them to fight for their country. It was relevant in that it was written during the American Revolution to encourage Americans to remain strong in the fight for freedom.

4. Do you find the author’s argument convincing? Why or why not?
I find Paine's arguments incredibly convincing because of how powerfully he writes them. He makes bold statements about the strength of America and the weakness and cowardly nature of the British, and speaks as an American man who simply wants what every American wants. He is convincing in his self-assuredness, as he discusses the nature of America's fight as if it is clear and obvious what the outcome will be, as long as America shows determination and doesn't back down. If a pamphlet of this nature were being read today, I think that it would be very effective in causing people to stop and think about what it actually means to be a united country that is banned together to fight for the simple right of being its own nation.

9 comments:

  1. I enjoyed this reading, and your CDL. Paine’s writing is more accessible than some of the other readings so far. I think that’s part of the point. He was writing for the common man, the not yet committed to the cause, as well as the people already fighting for the revolution. And I agree he is convincing in his self-assuredness. His equating Tories with vermin in his description of the Middle Colonies as “infested with Tories” is an example of his excellence at the craft of spin (a.k.a. propaganda). I also like the passage “for though the flame of liberty may sometimes cease to shine, the coal can never expire" is an extremely well turned phrase.
    This piece also reenforces the earlier reading and TA on newspapers by showing us another way that the printing press was used by the colonists to “spread the word” about the cause.
    I think not just History classes should study this. Writing classes and classes about logic, rhetoric and arguments should study this document to learn about spin. It’s really quite brilliant. That doesn’t mean I disagree with it. With 20/20 hindsight, and the lens of time, I feel it’s a good thing Paine et. al. did what they did. But I don’t think Canada, where many Tories moved to after the Revolution, is a bad place.
    I agree with you, this is a very moving piece of prose. We are in good company The site we linked through to access The Crisis, ushistory.org says “General Washington found the first essay so inspiring, he ordered that it be read to the troops at Valley Forge.”
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  2. I agree with your text analysis about Thomas Paine’s The American Crisis which happened during the American Revolution. I would like to add that Paine believed in God that the God will support them during the war “so unlimited a power can belong only to God.” He believed that the British were trying to take over God’s power so that they can rule Americans as for their profits. He believed that the God will help their military officials to win the war “God Almighty will not give up a people to military destruction, or leave them unsupportedly to perish, who have so earnestly.” He is so appealing in the document stating that America will never be happy until it becomes independent. Therefore, he was positive in his mission to fight for freedom and to find resolution in America. The document is important in American history because it accounts for real life events that made the strong America as it is. I think Paine was convincing because he wasn’t afraid to use his philosophies of what he thought was right or wrong.

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  3. The way you summed up all that was in the essay was great. It really did just come down to those three points that Paine was so passionate in conveying. In my opinion however, due to the amount of passion Paine shows I feel that his credability becomes a little weaker. The fact he "assumes" how Americans think and feel, though he may be right, is not a logical way of convincing or encouraging. Also, I just feel that because he is so emotionally attached his logic may be more like a battle cry than a truly convincing agrument. But I'm sure the audience this was intended for such as the soliders ready to go fight some more related to Paine on this level so it completely fulfilled its purpose.

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  4. I must say, you summarized paragraphs of information very nicely! I think it's always tough to find what's most important in essays and summarize it but you did a really good job. Paine's writing is powerful and I also like when he brings in God, especially in the last paragraph when he states, "I thank God, that I fear not." It shows how much trust he has in God and how much faith he has in the American people. To be under British rule and to finally come out and fight for freedom to be whatever they want to be inspires me and I can't thank them enough for what they did for this country. Though I know this document did seem more emotional than logical, I'm glad it was because he was trying to get his message across that they can rise up and defeat the British. I also enjoyed this reading, as well as Common Sense. They are two important documents in history that I think everybody should read.

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  5. I think that your Text Analysis couldn’t be any better. Paine was a respected man back in the days and is still remembered about his beliefs, ideas and events. The quotes in your analysis make your point stronger. The fact that you were able to appeal logos, pathos, and ethos is just impressive. I agree with you that Paine was passionate when he was speaking out to people. He used his religion in his speeches, at the time people were religious and they listened to him. This document meant a lot to the Americans because if it weren’t for this man and his wise words the soldiers could’ve given up fighting for freedom. His speeches were written to raise American peoples’ self-esteem and give inspiration. This document made America be what it is right now and I am glad for all the people that made this country be an independent and free from anyone’s rulings. People should not forget what Paine did for our country.

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  6. I have read your text analysis and would most definitely have to agree with you on the fact that the author is arguing and saying that America still has hope and could be free from Britain if they defeat them, that they would become independent, they wouldn’t have to pay taxes to Britain, and etc. Also, I would strongly have to agree with you on the fact that Thomas Paine was a great writer, after all we still read many of his documents to this day. You did a good job of saying that the author used logic in saying that if they wouldn’t defeat Britain that they would pretty much be ruled by Britain. To sum it all up, you did a terrific job in saying how this document is relevant to us and I couldn’t agree more with you. Paine was a very motivational writer and if it weren’t for this document, then who knows, the soldiers might’ve not won the battle and we would be under British rule.

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  7. Your summary is very thorough. The content of "The Crisis" is very moving, and appeals to those who are faithful to God and have desire to break free from England. While it is logical, it really works on an emotional level. I think this has to do with the time it was written and the place it was read aloud. Washington and his troops had to face much hardship and bad weather while crossing the Delaware River and fighting for their independence. This emotional text was to stir their feelings of courage, duty and belief in their cause, despite the troop's fatigue and discouragement. Paine's piece not only provides a picture of the strong desires for freedom at that time, but also provides energy and hope to those fighting through his words. That's one reason why it is so important.

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  8. First off good job on your Text Analysis I feel you did really good on your argument section of you text. I agree with you about Paine saying Americans would have beenin a better position had they declared independence earlier. I feel he was a good writer and he was very passionate about his opinions. And a lot religious people listened to him. Your text was easy to understand and straight to the point and I really liked it.

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