Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Text Analysis: "A Proclamation of the Whiskey Rebellion, 1794"

1. What is the author arguing?

The author, George Washington, is arguing about one main point throughout his Proclamation. He is speaking in response to the Whiskey Rebellion; the resistance by protestors against the tax on whiskey in the US during the 1790s. His argument is against those who have protested the whiskey tax and acted out violently in response to it. Basically, he argues that the government has executed its powers justly in order to uphold the laws of the Union, by raising a militia force against the violent protesters. He specifically refers to the law which justifies the government’s actions in the third paragraph of his Proclamation:

“And whereas, by a law of the United States entitled "An act to provide for calling forth the militia to execute the laws of the Union, suppress insurrections, and repel invasions," it is enacted that whenever the laws of the United States shall be opposed or the execution thereof obstructed in any state by combinations too powerful to be suppressed by the ordinary course of judicial proceedings. . .it shall be lawful for the President of the United States to call forth the militia of such state to suppress such combinations and to cause the laws to be duly executed.”

This passage explains the justification behind the actions which Washington has taken, and is the main support for his argument. He sums up his argument towards the end of his Proclamation. stating:

“And whereas, it is in my judgment necessary under the circumstances of the case to take measures for calling forth the militia in order to suppress the combinations aforesaid, and to cause the laws to be duly executed; and I have accordingly determined so to do, feeling the deepest regret for the occasion, but withal the most solemn conviction that the essential interests of the Union demand it”

The President is confident that the government has taken the legal and necessary actions to suppress the violence of the resistance against the whiskey tax, and despite his regret in taking these actions, it was done in the interest of protecting the future of the Union.

2. How does the author appeal to logos (logic), pathos (emotional quality), and ethos (the writer’s perceived character) with their argument?

Because of the way that the Proclamation is organized, and the language that Washington uses, it is difficult upon a first reading to identify the author’s appeal to pathos and ethos. The logic of Washington’s argument is the main focus of the Proclamation, as he clearly states the events which have occurred with regards to the whiskey tax and the Whiskey Rebellion, and goes on to logically justify the government’s actions in response. The Proclamation almost reads like a legal document which is stating the chronological order of events and necessary actions in a clear and concise manner.
Upon closer analysis, Washington’s appeal to pathos and ethos can be subtly identified. The pathos, or emotional quality of his argument can be seen in his responses to the violent resistance of the whiskey tax protesters. He describes some of these actions in his first passage:

“. . .by actually injuring and destroying the property of persons who were understood to have so complied; by inflicting cruel and humiliating punishments upon private citizens for no other cause than that of appearing to be the friends of the laws; by intercepting the public officers on the highways, abusing, assaulting, and otherwise ill treating them; by going into their houses in the night, gaining admittance by force, taking away their papers, and committing other outrages. . .”

This response shows Washington’s sympathy towards those who were the victims of the violent resistance against the whiskey tax. It appeals to emotion, as it also seems to provoke sympathy from the audience by including the detail of the violent actions. This passage can also be seen as an example of Washington appealing to ethos, or his own perceived character, by representing himself as a sympathetic man, and also one who is against unwarranted violence against others, especially those who attempt to uphold the law. Throughout the Proclamation, Washington’s voice comes through as a strong and honest one, and he speaks as a man whose number one priority and concern is the future of his nation and the effectiveness of the government in protecting it.

3. What is the historical significance/relevance of this document?

“A Proclamation of the Whiskey Rebellion” was written by George Washington in August of 1794. It is a response to the violent resistance against the tax on whiskey, which had been created by Alexander Hamilton as a part of his plan to help reduce the national debt. Protestors in Pennsylvania refused to pay the tax, and acted out violently when the U.S. Marshall came to collect in July of 1794. Tax collector George John Neville was a victim of this violence, as his home was openly attacked. In response to this incident, President Washington sent peace commissioners to Pennsylvania, and raised a militia force, in order to uphold the law and restore order.

4. Do you find the author’s argument convincing? Why or why not?

I find Washington’s argument very convincing, due to the authority with which he delivers his Proclamation. It reads as more of a statement than an argument, as he clearly explains his own reaction to the events of the Whiskey Rebellion, and justifies that the government was right in responding to the situation in the way that it did. He is convincing in provoking sympathy for those who were victims of violence simply because they were attempting to uphold and enforce the laws of the Union. It is clear that he is truly concerned for the future of the nation, and has extreme faith in the strength of the U.S. government, and does a convincing job of conveying this.

12 comments:

  1. I would like to add the importance of treason to this well-written analysis. Washington states many times that those who were disobeying the tax were committing treason and disrespecting their country. Being a leader in the country, Washington obviously cared for it deeply and had some input on the tax. I believe he honestly thought it was a reasonable way to come out of debt so he supported the tax. To me, I feel the passion he had for keeping the country afloat was offended when people were outwardly disobeying and in a sense tearing things apart. Those who committ treason are not wanted in the country, but before taking harsh action Washington warns those who committed treason of the consequences. I feel this shows even more heart on Washington's part- gaining more emotional credability.

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  2. I like your post. I felt like Washington was kind of torn, he understood why the people were upset, and could feelm their pain. but he also had to keep his stance in the government position he had and had to try and show the people that what they were doing was wrong, and that they could find other ways to show their problems with the tax. I also agree with Sanderson. With hos position he had a hand in the tax being passed and was somewhat getting a slap in the face by the people.

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  3. I would like to say that I enjoyed your analysis. I also think that Sanderson makes a good point when discussion treason, I do think it was honorable to be lenient with those who were committing treason, you could tell that he loved his country and felt his country mens pain as Daellis50 stated. I also like the point you make when you say that his proclamation reads as a statement not an argument, because that is what a proclamation is. Overall, a great review of the pathos and logic parts to his statement.

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  4. Your text analysis was very well written. I like the way that Washington did what’s best for the country. Washington was right that in order to keep the country together and in control there needed to be strict taxes and that if someone disobeyed the law that they are destroying the country. The protestors were using violence in their arguments and Washington had troops stop the protest because he knew if they would win the protest them the people will feel power and would just protest against the new laws and taxes that the government makes. You really gave a lot of thought into the second question identifying logos, pathos, and ethos of the text. Great Job!

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  5. I agree I think it was very convincing. I had to read it twice to understand everything he was saying because the first time through it just seemed like a lot and I was overwhelmed but the second time through it all seemed a lot more clear. He was very forward with his writing and described the rebellion very well. The way he talked about the events happening without specifying the whiskey rebellion I found a bit commical. I liked how he explained why the government had the right to take action and the events that led up to that right as well.
    Your analysis was very detailed and specific and I thought it was very good. I liked how you copied the sections you were talking about specifically. Very good job :)

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  7. Very thorough analysis. I think Washington tried to make a logical and thoughtful argument why the national government had a right to take action against the rebels opposing the tax. This is a clear action on the national government's part to show the states are unified as one country and that the states must indeed follow the rules as laid out by the national government. Their actions cannot and will not be ignored and as citizens of the USA, they will be subject to laws (and taxes) of the national government. It could be said that Washington called in the "big guns" by sending troops and writing this proclamation, to get the point across that the rebellion was not ok and that the taxes were a strong reality.

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  8. I find your text analysis very convincing, i love the way you used text from the document to prove what the author was arguing. I like this document because this document was written by George Washington and had a purpose to stop the rebellions against tax and whiskey. I like the way that you answered question number two, with text from the document and making it very clear for us readers. I would strongly have to agree with you and your answer to question number three; if it weren't for this document people would have kept rebelling for every law that was ever made by the government. I would also have to agree with you when you said that the author's argument was convincing. George Washington did do what he had to do in order to keep the people from over-reacting.

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  9. your response made me think a lot. it made me think about the way the men who rebelled most of all. they wanted there whiskey right? well arnt there actions on convincing the people that they dont need whiskey? are they not violent enough? i still cant believe people killed over beer! it seems ludicrous. i liked how you brought to light the emotional argument because i didnt see it the first time i read the speech. but now i see that he truly wants to protect his people. he is ther ruler after all. it makes him seem like a better president. that must have been a hard decision though. you take away from one and give to another. how can you make it so everybody wins? unfortunately, you cant always do that. good job

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  11. wow i rlly like this very cool

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